Thursday, May 20, 2010

5 Facts About My Character

  1. Nyazia is from Atlanta , Georgia.
  2. She is 13 year's old.
  3. She now goes to Middleton JR. High.
  4. She has divorced parent's.
  5. She has been abused in her passed life

Tuesday, May 11, 2010

Plot Outline

I.INTRODUCTION
A. THE SETTING OF MY STORY IS AT MIDDLETON JR.HIGH. IT TAKES PLACE AT THE SCHOOL , IN NYAZIA'S HOUSE , AND REGINA'S HOUSE.
B. THE MAIN CHARACTER'S ARE NYAZIA, REGINA, RACHEL , AND MIKE.
C. NYAZIA WILL FORESHADOW WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT.

II. RISING ACTION
A. MY CHARACTER DEVELOPS BY REALIZING THAT EVERYTHING IS NOT ABOUT BEING POPULAR. JUST BE YOURSELF AND YOU WILL MAKE FRIENDS SOME HOW.
B. NYAZIA WANTS TO BE POPULAR. SHE WANT'S THIS BECAUSE SHE JUST GOT TO THIS SCHOOL AND SHE WANTS TO FIT IN. SHE CARE'S ABOUT FITTING IN AND HAVIG A BUNCH OF FRIENDS AND SHE WANTS EVERYONE TO KNOW HER.

III.CLIMAX
A. THE MOST IMPORTANT EVENT IN NYAZIA'S LIFE IS WHEN SHE REALIZED THAT SHE HAD BEEN RAPED AND SHE DECIDED NOT TO TELL.
B. A TURNING POINT IN NYAZIA'S LIFE IS WHEN HER DAD FOUND OUT SHE HAS BEEN RAPED AND NOW HE WANTS TO KILL THE PERSON THAT DID THIS.

IV. FALLING ACTION
A. THE DIRECT RESULT'S OF THE CLIMAX IS NYAZIA'S PARENTS FOUND OUT ABOUT THE RAPE AND HER MOM STARTS TO ABUSE HER AND HER DAD LEAVES.
B. NYAZIA'S REACTION TO ALL THE THING'S THAT HAPPENED IS SHE TRIES TO COMMIT SUICIDE AND SHE TRIES TO RUNAWAY.

V. NYAZIA LEARNED THAT SHE HAS BETTER FRIENDS LIKE RACHEL. THE LESSON THAT NYAZIA LEARNED AFFECTED HER LETTING HER BE HERSELF AND ENDING UP WITH BETTER FRIENDS SHE STARTED TO BECOME A ROLE MODEL TO KIDS BECAUSE SHE WENT THROUGH SO MUCH BUT SHE STILL
SUCCEED

Tuesday, April 20, 2010

Sample Chapter: The Middle Chapter

Regina called me and asked her can I come to her party at Planet Hollywood of course I said yes parties that she throws are called parties of the century and if you are invited to a party you will be invited to more. I put on my fancy dress and took a cab. The house was gigantic and you can here the music two blocks away. I walked in and saw Rachel and her new B.F.F.N.M.W. There were a lot of boys and beer and I had to squeeze between boys and girls thrusting on each other and I finally found Regina in the kitchen. I asked Regina does she have punch then she put a twisted up face and said " are you serious you don't drink beer your 13 aren't you." I told her yeah of course I drink beer ( that was a total lie). " so shut up and get a beer" . I went to the cooler and took a can of Bud Light and opened it. I drank it like I spent 2 days in the Sahara Desert. Two hours later i felt woozy and funny. This boy came in front of me and asked me if i was alright i answered no . He gave me a icepack and took me to Regina's parents room. I fell on the bed i wanted to sleep this off, But this boy who seemed so nice wouldn't leave me alone he kept touching me and kissing me like he liked me. I pushed him off and tried to run but he got up and slammed me on the bed. He took four bandannas and tied my arms and legs to the bed my eyes were blurry so I couldn't see anything . He kissed my neck and whispered " don't worry every thing is fine ".He pulled my clothes off and did all these types of horrid things to me . The next morning I woke up with a silk gown on I thought my mom bought it so I went down to thank her , But this house was not my house it was Regina's she was down stairs eating her mom asked am I OK , I told her something really horrible happened to me but I can't remember.


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Thursday, April 15, 2010

TEN EVENTS

I.Nyazia moved from Atlanta, Georgia to Manhattan .Went to a new school called Middleton High

III.Met a new girl named Rachel and ditched Rachel for four cool girls named:

4.Regina , Krissy , Katherine, And Ashely start to leave Nyazia out from all their activities.

5.Nyazia starts to think twice about her decision when she relize she is not accepted in the group and Rachel has a new friend.

6.She goes home to think about her decision Regina calls her and invites her to her birthday party at Planet Hollywood .

7.Nyazia says yes and forgets about her decision and goes .

8.There were a lot of boys and a bunch of beer . One boy wouldn't leave her alone she asks Regina is there fruit punch . Regina makes fun of Nyazia and forces her to drink beer.

9.Nyazia ends up drunk and when she wakes up she's in a boys bed with no clothes on .

10.Nyazia can't even believe she just been raped . She tells Regina she wants out Regina told her once you are in there is no way coming out.

Novel Pitch

This novel is called "They Chose Me" it is about a new girl named Nyazia coming from Georgia and moved to Manhattan. There she see's four girls named Regina, Krissy , Kaherine,and ,Ashely that are way cool.It took her a few days to make friends, but the cool girls decide to be Nyazia's friend. Nyazia really wants to fit in so she ditched her best friend Rachel . Nyazia starts to get left out and shes starting to think twice about the decisionshe made. Is there a way to get out?

Tuesday, February 9, 2010

The Last Orangutan

3. I think the reason the orangutans are becoming extinct because of the boom in logging and plantation argiculture thier enviorment has shrunken 80%.

4. The picture of Galdikas and the baby orangutans serves that she really cares about the animals and that she dosent want nothing else to happen to them.

Wednesday, January 27, 2010

Tuesday, January 26, 2010

# 81 : MILES TO GO pg 98

Despite my mouthful of humble pie, life kept going full throttle .I went on tour, opening for THE CHEETAH GIRLS ' THE Party Began tour in the fall of 2006. We were done shooting the first season of Hannah Montana , but only half of had aired on tv. Before THE CHEETAH GIRLS concert , nobody knew if folks would Text Colorcare that I was opening for them. True, HANNAH MONTANA had been instant success, but that didnt mean anybody wanted to see me in the concert as HANNAH. HANNAH'S a fictional

MILES TO GO

Mean while , Dad and I were working really well together. Every teenager and father have some of he same problems . You want a new

Thursday, November 19, 2009

The Watsons go to Birmingham

1. It was so cold on Saturday, the Watson's sat huddled together under a blanket on the couch



2. Momma felt the cold the most because she was from Alabama



3.Kenny and his family lived in Flint Michigan



4. Joetta was Kenny's little sister



5. According to Kenny, which of the following was not true of his older brother Byron: he didn't want to touch anyone or be touched.



6. The weather man said the temperature in Atlanta, Georgia would reach the mid- seventies.



7. Dad told Kenny , Byron , and Joetta they were lucky not to be children of mommas old boyfriend named Hambone Henderson.



8. When she was about to laugh , Momma put her hand over her mouth because she had a big gap between between her two front teeth



9. Which of the following was not a warning Moses Henderson gave momma about Flin: IT was to cold , babies were born with lumpy heads



10. Momma said life in Birmingham , even though it was not perfect , was slower and the people are more honest about the way they felt.



11. Since they couldn't contact their landlord about their cold apartment , the Watson's planned to spend the night with Aunt Cyndey.



12. The Brown Bomber was the Watson's 1948 Ply mouth



13. Byron and Kenny were not happy when their dad ordered them to scraped the ice off the car windows.



14. Kenny was agitated because Byron was not doing his share of work.



15. The night before , Byron and his friend Buphead had given Kenny lessons on how to survive a blizzard.

16. At first Kenny ignored Byron's calls because he thought his brother was playing another trick on him.

17. Kenny discoverd that Byrons moth was frozen onto the the outside mirror.

18. Kenny's parent's were shook up when they heard Byron was crying.

19. Dad laughed at Byron's predicament because he realized that Byron had been kissing his reflection in the mirror.

20. Kenny could tell Momma was worried because she started talking southern style .

21. During Byron's ordeal, dad kept laughing and making jokes about the situation

22. Pouring hot water on the mirror was not a good idea.

23. With all of them crying standing around the car in freezing temperatures ,Kenny thought it was no wonder the neighbors called them the Weird Watson's.

24. Momma freed Byron from his predicament by yanking his head away from the mirror.

25. On the way to Aunt Cyndey's when Kenny paid Byron back for punching him in the forhead and not doing his share of his work , all the Watson's cracked up.

Wednesday, November 18, 2009

H.W #43

In this part Maleeka got into a fight with Daphene.The reason they had a fight was because Daphene thought that Maleeka was kissing her boyfriend Worm ,but that was not Maleeka it was Charlese. Maleeka knew that Daphene wanted a fight so Daphene grabbed Maleeka's braids and started punching Maleeka with them then Miss Saunders came and Maleeka was about to smack Daphene , but Miss Saunders grabbed her hand and said cut it out. Then Daphene raised her hand with the heavy ring that worm gave to her had on it and smacked her hand across Maleeka's face. Maleeka's face was swelling up she could feel the blood oozing through her cheek and then Daphene gobbled up a glob of green snot spit then that globed flew on Maleeka's face!!

If I were Maleeka at this moment i would of messed Daphene up because , one she is accusing me of something i never knew then I would of messed Charlese up because shr was just standing there eating a chocolate bar like nothing was going on and then when i got spit on she was the first one out of the whole crowd to start cracking up instead of trying to ignore trouble and saying Daphnee don't fight it wasn't Maleeka it was me or Daphnee who wasn't giving me a chance to explain who it really was which is STUPID!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tuesday, November 17, 2009

HW #42

Exercise A: threw:passing from one side to the other the past tense of throw
weak: not strong weak
week: seven days
whose:belonging to which person place or thing
who's:a contraction of who and is
your:belonging to you
you're:a contraction of you and are
Exercise B:where
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Exercise C:whether
whole
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Monday, November 16, 2009

H.W # 40

In school Maleeka asked Char did she bring her any clothes. Char kicked the bag to Maleeka and the clothes that Char bought Maleeka were a tight jean jumper. But one day when Maleeka went home , her mom was at the window with a big smile on her face , she told Maleeka that she got a bonus on her check and finally got some extra money to throw around , so Maleeka got some shirts , some pants , and enough lip gloss to shine rims on a car. When she went to school and she was walking down the hallway strutting her stuff and everyone was looking at her. When she got to Miss Saunders class Char had to put Maleeka on the spot and said your momma finally got you some new clothes.

I think the relationship between Char and Maleeka are unusual because their friendship is on and off. It is like one day Char is giving Maleeka really expensive clothes and the next day Char is dissing Maleeka really bad and then it repeats everyday over and over again


Thursday, November 12, 2009

HW#37

Esperanza is a girl who has moved every year and she never skipped a year she would move to north Carolina in 2004,in 2005 she would move to Bronx and so on. when she moved to a really not so beautiful house on mango street everything go's wrong. The house has one washroom ( bathroom)one bedroom their living room is smaller than the bathroom. She is embarrassed for people to see her house for example she goes to a Catholic school and sister Samantha came to go speak to her mom and when she saw her house the sister open her mouth so wide a fly can go in it she looked surprised also shocked the sister walked away real quickly like she never saw nothing.

If I were Esperanza at this moment i would walk to her and ask her what is the matter i thought you had to talk to my mom and tell her that some people can't afford luxury condos and big houses with pools and backyards with little play parks in it. I would also tell that this is all my mom could afford and i like it just the way it is and no one cares how shocked or surprised she is and no one cares about her rude opinion.

HW#31

A song that reminds me someone is Thinking Of You by Katy Perry it reminds me of both of grandfathers because they had past away when i wasn't even thought of . there names were Victor and Earl. They both died from heartatakes. i wish they were still alive so they can see there grandaughter and how big she had got but there is one thing i know is that he is watching is grandaughter from up above

Tuesday, November 10, 2009

Forgeting The Past Changing The Future

The African burial ground is a place were african people were burried.It tells you that their are slaves and it is sad how most slaves usually die in their fortys.People that are this nationality are finally getting the respect they deserve.

The africans were first bought to New York by the Dutch in the 17th and 18th centuries.tThey were from many diffrent regions,cultures,and religions. More than 12 million men, women and children made the agonizing voyagae across the Alantic Ocean. In the African burial ground a lady was found with an infant in the crook of her arm. A lady was found with a musket ball in the side of her ribs. A man was also found a sign on his coffin called sankofa which means hope.That is the sign that is used more often in the burial ground.

I think that this place will help other people who are African need to realize that some of thier people are being noticed and finally appreciated. Even people who arent that nationality will realize how bad they were treated and how they get more respect in the 21 century.