Monday, November 16, 2009

H.W # 40

In school Maleeka asked Char did she bring her any clothes. Char kicked the bag to Maleeka and the clothes that Char bought Maleeka were a tight jean jumper. But one day when Maleeka went home , her mom was at the window with a big smile on her face , she told Maleeka that she got a bonus on her check and finally got some extra money to throw around , so Maleeka got some shirts , some pants , and enough lip gloss to shine rims on a car. When she went to school and she was walking down the hallway strutting her stuff and everyone was looking at her. When she got to Miss Saunders class Char had to put Maleeka on the spot and said your momma finally got you some new clothes.

I think the relationship between Char and Maleeka are unusual because their friendship is on and off. It is like one day Char is giving Maleeka really expensive clothes and the next day Char is dissing Maleeka really bad and then it repeats everyday over and over again


1 comment:

Editor said...

Akira-
Good job, please put how many pages you read and how long you read for.

Why do you think Maleeka continues to be Char's friend?

Please be careful of your punctuation — your response ends without a period.

Mr. Enders