Tuesday, April 20, 2010

Sample Chapter: The Middle Chapter

Regina called me and asked her can I come to her party at Planet Hollywood of course I said yes parties that she throws are called parties of the century and if you are invited to a party you will be invited to more. I put on my fancy dress and took a cab. The house was gigantic and you can here the music two blocks away. I walked in and saw Rachel and her new B.F.F.N.M.W. There were a lot of boys and beer and I had to squeeze between boys and girls thrusting on each other and I finally found Regina in the kitchen. I asked Regina does she have punch then she put a twisted up face and said " are you serious you don't drink beer your 13 aren't you." I told her yeah of course I drink beer ( that was a total lie). " so shut up and get a beer" . I went to the cooler and took a can of Bud Light and opened it. I drank it like I spent 2 days in the Sahara Desert. Two hours later i felt woozy and funny. This boy came in front of me and asked me if i was alright i answered no . He gave me a icepack and took me to Regina's parents room. I fell on the bed i wanted to sleep this off, But this boy who seemed so nice wouldn't leave me alone he kept touching me and kissing me like he liked me. I pushed him off and tried to run but he got up and slammed me on the bed. He took four bandannas and tied my arms and legs to the bed my eyes were blurry so I couldn't see anything . He kissed my neck and whispered " don't worry every thing is fine ".He pulled my clothes off and did all these types of horrid things to me . The next morning I woke up with a silk gown on I thought my mom bought it so I went down to thank her , But this house was not my house it was Regina's she was down stairs eating her mom asked am I OK , I told her something really horrible happened to me but I can't remember.


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Thursday, April 15, 2010

TEN EVENTS

I.Nyazia moved from Atlanta, Georgia to Manhattan .Went to a new school called Middleton High

III.Met a new girl named Rachel and ditched Rachel for four cool girls named:

4.Regina , Krissy , Katherine, And Ashely start to leave Nyazia out from all their activities.

5.Nyazia starts to think twice about her decision when she relize she is not accepted in the group and Rachel has a new friend.

6.She goes home to think about her decision Regina calls her and invites her to her birthday party at Planet Hollywood .

7.Nyazia says yes and forgets about her decision and goes .

8.There were a lot of boys and a bunch of beer . One boy wouldn't leave her alone she asks Regina is there fruit punch . Regina makes fun of Nyazia and forces her to drink beer.

9.Nyazia ends up drunk and when she wakes up she's in a boys bed with no clothes on .

10.Nyazia can't even believe she just been raped . She tells Regina she wants out Regina told her once you are in there is no way coming out.

Novel Pitch

This novel is called "They Chose Me" it is about a new girl named Nyazia coming from Georgia and moved to Manhattan. There she see's four girls named Regina, Krissy , Kaherine,and ,Ashely that are way cool.It took her a few days to make friends, but the cool girls decide to be Nyazia's friend. Nyazia really wants to fit in so she ditched her best friend Rachel . Nyazia starts to get left out and shes starting to think twice about the decisionshe made. Is there a way to get out?